RoS Theory of Mind chapter 2 p65

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Recently I got some new ideas and I wrote the whole plot for ToM in more detail So for the ones still following...ToM is to be continued
Characters featured: Thaldo: the dark brown tabby guy with funny haircut. Nigras; the large, maned black siderian male. Tsjaiko: the light lynx-tabby guy.

Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel - and not loosing even more readers...
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