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RoS Theory of Mind chapter 3 p86

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Character  LannaCharacter  Yves SiyotèsCharacter  Sasha Kraznjeva

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It's getting darker :) And this is the last page of this scene... after this page we will make a few years time-jump! Drawing such a page may take some time so I don't know if can have the next page ready in two weeks.

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Vannjaren's avatar
Ha, indeed it's getting darker, I love how you show times of day and also seasons in your comic, it adds nice variation and also makes the passage of time feel more real and natural. :love: :heart:
I can't help but sympathise a lot with Lanna, she is in a difficult position, and although she wants to help, she can't find a resolution by herself - I hope things will work out for her and her clan, but I get the feeling something is on the horizon, though I don't know what just yet.

I love the shading and detail on Yves and Sasha in the lower panels, and also how their expressions and postures show their intimate relationship and affection for each other. The lighting is simply gorgeous, love how you show the surrounding tones in Yves' fur. <3

I wonder what Sabi will do from here, as she can't stay following them forever - I imagine she tracks them but now and then goes back to the Chorda clan? I thought it would be unusual perhaps for her to spend years completely on her own like that.
And indeed, Sasha's worries still persist - she may seem quite fiery at times but she also seems to worry rather a lot and seems almost more nervous than her bravado may suggest sometimes (indeed, I wonder if her defensive attitude actually stems from her perhaps being a bit anxious as an individual now and then)

As for the critiques, there is a little dialogue issue. Firstly, you type "Place we met" - perhaps instead you should put "leave a sign where we met", or "leave a sign at the place where we met".