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Tycho and Farran blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… have been growing up to young adults with still some adolescent tendencies...
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The characters featured in this page:Tycho (darker grey, grey eyed, Mohawk), Farran (light grey spotted, green eyed). Tania, the daughter of the dark brown hyena in this page blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… and here blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… (the leading one in front). Tania is the leader of a sub-group within the large Chorda-clan, led by Nebu (see here blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… the black standing one).
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Tycho and Farran blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… have been growing up to young adults with still some adolescent tendencies...
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The characters featured in this page:Tycho (darker grey, grey eyed, Mohawk), Farran (light grey spotted, green eyed). Tania, the daughter of the dark brown hyena in this page blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… and here blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… (the leading one in front). Tania is the leader of a sub-group within the large Chorda-clan, led by Nebu (see here blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… the black standing one).
Please help me with the English! I suck at that and I'm master of typo's which I never see myself
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Help Reign of Siderians growing and spread these stamps:
Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel XD
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Art, Northern hyena species, characters and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!
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In panel two I think the first speech bubble should read "Sabi is after him. But I don't think she'll catch him until at least tomorrow." or "But I doubt she'll make it until tomorrow." 
Flows better and makes more sense with the context. "But I wonder if she will make it until tomorrow" makes it sound like a question rather than a statement.
Flows better and makes more sense with the context. "But I wonder if she will make it until tomorrow" makes it sound like a question rather than a statement.