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RoS Theory of Mind chapter 3 p78

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Character  Yves SiyotèsCharacter  Sasha KraznjevaCharacter  Sabi

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Again a ToM scene during a sunset or a sunrise. That's the problem with having mainly a crepuscular species...I hope there aren't any typing mistakes or stupid sentences. Feed back on that is welcome. 
Oh and just to make clear - maybe the map was a bit unclear- they went to the siderian metacluster named Zilval Summits (previously called l'Étendard), located in the French Alps :)

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And another, maybe even more important reason why ToM will go slower, is that I have started writing the plot for the next, more serious volume of Reign of Siderians. It will be about Stian  (my personal fav, and main oc) and the human-siderian (generally large carnivores) conflict. This needs some proper literature research on many aspects since I don't want to portray neither siderians, nor humans as 'evil' but show the complexity of the situation, based on a scientific background. As I continue and this story (the volume will be called Predator Control) gets form, I will submit some preview artworks, but the volume will not be submitted page by page like ToM. Maybe chapter by chapter or just all at once - but this will take some years.
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Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel - especially as it comes to English.
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Time for some very late ToM comments...
(you don't need to reply to these of course, I'm just leaving feedback anyway for now)

I love how you show the first panel with Yves' paw, it somehow makes the viewer feel more of a part of his journey. The shine in his eye in the next panel works really well too, it sort of almost has a fantasy look, but it makes you think more of his own state of mind, the things he saw then and what he sees now, and the conflicting feelings and memories he has for this place.

The anatomy and scenery is great as usual, and I love your lighting and backgrounds so much I need to control myself from not typing too much about it. <3 Love the melting snow in the background here too, beautiful page. :heart: