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Sun is setting... and now it's time for me to have a ToM break in the Christmas holiday.
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Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel - especially as it comes to English.
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Art, story, characters, siderian species and northern hyaena species by me.
first : blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar…
Sun is setting... and now it's time for me to have a ToM break in the Christmas holiday.
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Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel - especially as it comes to English.
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Help Reign of Siderians growing and spread these stamps:
Art, story, characters, siderian species and northern hyaena species by me.
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Beautiful work indeed, lovely details on your mountains as always.
I like how you can see it getting darker here, as they look for somewhere to spend the night after their journey, and it looks like quite an exposed area so shelter would make sense.
(haha, I now get a stupid mental image of a failed Kroven attempt at fitting into a small cave, with the tail, butt and hind legs sticking out. )
When I first read this page, I wasn't sure if Yves was telling the truth about the kitten as a ruse, but of course in coming pages we find out he was telling the truth.
There is a typo btw in the bottom right, where you have repeated the word "the".
Haha, when Lanna tells them to be careful with their contacts, I can't help but wonder if she suspects they are not alone, and perhaps she can smell Sabi as a scent she does not recognise...
I like how you can see it getting darker here, as they look for somewhere to spend the night after their journey, and it looks like quite an exposed area so shelter would make sense.
(haha, I now get a stupid mental image of a failed Kroven attempt at fitting into a small cave, with the tail, butt and hind legs sticking out. )
When I first read this page, I wasn't sure if Yves was telling the truth about the kitten as a ruse, but of course in coming pages we find out he was telling the truth.
There is a typo btw in the bottom right, where you have repeated the word "the".
Haha, when Lanna tells them to be careful with their contacts, I can't help but wonder if she suspects they are not alone, and perhaps she can smell Sabi as a scent she does not recognise...