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Finally a little bit more inside crystal stuff. And finally a scene again rather than a 10 years time jump in four pages
. No more huge time-jumps from now on. Maybe some flashbacks of what happened in those 10 years, but the main focus will be the coming happenings.
Now it gets interesting....
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Finally a little bit more inside crystal stuff. And finally a scene again rather than a 10 years time jump in four pages
. No more huge time-jumps from now on. Maybe some flashbacks of what happened in those 10 years, but the main focus will be the coming happenings. Now it gets interesting....
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Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel - especially as it comes to English.
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Wow, I utterly LOVE this page! 
I think the colouring in this is just fantastic - the first panel with Noiro's face is one of my favourite panels so far in terms of colouring from you! 
The detail and realistic lines of shine on his face where you can see the three-dimensional form of his face as well as the sheen of his fur and the reflected light of the crystals... damn. Just stunning, I could look at it for hours. Even the shine on his lightals - just perfect.
Interesting to hear about some of the different uses for the crystals, I like how you're expanding this lore and revealing more of it on dA, always interesting to learn about. (I have a few questions to come in another comment - for now just read and delete this comment like the other ones on the comics)
I love the strong and sharp lighting on Yves, and the vibrant but still realistic colours in this page, really gives a summery atmosphere full of life.
I wonder this for now though - is Noiro especially talented with the crystals to be making such progress with something supposedly not easy to begin with - or is Yves a good teacher, or is it a bit of both? (I find it interesting that it is Yves teaching Noiro about the crystals, when he himself was a relative stranger to them to start with, having spent most of his young life with the Northern Hyenas).
Anyway, another gorgeous piece, love the lighting on the mountains in the bg too! ^^
I think the colouring in this is just fantastic - the first panel with Noiro's face is one of my favourite panels so far in terms of colouring from you! The detail and realistic lines of shine on his face where you can see the three-dimensional form of his face as well as the sheen of his fur and the reflected light of the crystals... damn. Just stunning, I could look at it for hours. Even the shine on his lightals - just perfect.Interesting to hear about some of the different uses for the crystals, I like how you're expanding this lore and revealing more of it on dA, always interesting to learn about. (I have a few questions to come in another comment - for now just read and delete this comment like the other ones on the comics)
I love the strong and sharp lighting on Yves, and the vibrant but still realistic colours in this page, really gives a summery atmosphere full of life.
I wonder this for now though - is Noiro especially talented with the crystals to be making such progress with something supposedly not easy to begin with - or is Yves a good teacher, or is it a bit of both? (I find it interesting that it is Yves teaching Noiro about the crystals, when he himself was a relative stranger to them to start with, having spent most of his young life with the Northern Hyenas).
Anyway, another gorgeous piece, love the lighting on the mountains in the bg too! ^^